Flickr Fiction: Escape from the ordinary
There are two types of running: Running to, and running from.
I was running from.
The weight of mediocrity was chasing me, and no matter how fast, or how far I ran I could feel its heavy breath on the wind behind me, feel the weight of its footsteps on the ground. Everywhere I turned, everywhere I ran it was there, just behind, ready to catch and consume me.
It was there when I flew through the cornfield, eyes wide in terror like so many before. Is there an original way to run through a field of corn? If you’re running to it’s leisurely, relaxed, gleeful, sensual. If you’re running from it’s dark and grey and cold and hurried.
Sometimes I caught a glimpse of the exceptional, and as I darted towards it I was running to, not from. Others darted too though, and the run turned into a stampede, with normality and convention right at the heart.
I kept running, through many fields: Golden fields of wheat and green meadows with sprinklings of spring flowers. I fled through cities: Bright, tall, glass cities, and old, worn, battered ones, bustling with people but empty of soul. In all I was indifferent, pedestrian, middling, undistinguished.
Everywhere I ran, and in everything I did, mediocrity was right there behind me.
Eventually I slowed - you can’t run forever - and mediocrity caught me, permeated my existence and turned me into yet another cookie cutter person in this cookie cutter world.
I’m biding my time though. Building up my resources. Preparing. Waiting. Until the time is right. And then I’ll run again.
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This short return to Flickr Fiction was inspired by This picture taken by tomdebiec from Flickr.
Written for Flickr Fiction Friday. Other Flickr Fictioneers who may have written about the same picture are: Donal,Elimare, Tadamack, Aquafortis, Chris, Valsha, Neil, and Mari.
Apologies to everyone for my absence from this for the last month or so.
Very nice arty piece, Isobel. And so I apologise that my comment will have nothing whatsoever to contribute to it……
Have you ever run through a cornfield? Really, it’s a serious matter. (My father-in-law is a corn farmer.) No matter how hard you try to avoid it, the leaves of the stalk slice right through you (think paper cut) and remember many of the leaves are right at eye level. Thus, the flickr photo brought back some painful memories! :-)
24 Mar 2007 at 9:30 pm
stirring piece. it is wonderful to read your flickr fiction again.
25 Mar 2007 at 1:12 am
Wow, really good one to come back with! Loved the atmosphere on this one.
25 Mar 2007 at 11:12 am
Welcome back to the race away from mediocrity. ;)
25 Mar 2007 at 7:10 pm
You caught the prevailing mood wonderfully in this one Is. One of my favourite pieces so far, excellent.
25 Mar 2007 at 10:46 pm
Isn’t it something how the cornfield is either a hideaway, or someplace to run to or away from? That’s in everyone’s pieces so far, it’s the weirdest thing. None of us just thought, “Oh, corn…”
I love that your character is running from mediocrity. Wish we could all run so well… Really well done!
26 Mar 2007 at 7:08 pm
Excellent piece. I second TadMack, it’s fab that the character is running from mediocrity (even though it catches up just the same …)
16 Apr 2007 at 10:03 pm