Shocking

Posted by Teaandcakes on Jan 28 2007 | Writing

“So. It’s been two months now Betty. How have you been?”

“Great thanks Doctor.”

“And how are the pills working out for you?

“Oh, I don’t need them any more. That electric shock treatment you showed me has been working a treat.”

“But you checked yourself out of the hospital after the first treatment. You were scheduled for five more sessions. That’s why we were trying the pills instead.”

“Oh I know Doctor, but I didn’t like the pills, so I thought I’d give the electric shocks another go, and I feel great now.”

“But you haven’t been back to the hospital.”

“Oh no Doctor, there’s no need for all that fuss. My Billy wired me up at home instead.”

~~

Inspired by This picture taken by receivingend from Flickr.

Do not try this at home!
Very rushed and short this week, sorry. I wanted to get something up but just couldn’t settle to write. I can’t even claim credit for the idea, it’s based on a true conversation a lecturer of mine had with a patient.

Written for Flickr Fiction Friday. Other Flickr Fictioners who may have written about the same picture are: Donal,Elimare, Tadamack, Aquafortis, HeavySigh, Chris, Valsha, and Neil.

7 comments for now

7 Responses to “Shocking”

  1. The disturbing part is that this is closer to the truth than we may think.

    28 Jan 2007 at 11:17 pm

  2. Is it bad that I found this funny? But I did!

    28 Jan 2007 at 11:46 pm

  3. Quite the shocking anecdote!
    I slay me.

    29 Jan 2007 at 12:23 am

  4. Very funny, but good lord… it’s based in fact?? zoiks!

    29 Jan 2007 at 10:13 am

  5. Oh, OUCH!
    Well that would save the hospital therapy costs, wouldn’t it? The last line is perfect.

    29 Jan 2007 at 5:39 pm

  6. elaine

    Weel done Billy!

    29 Jan 2007 at 9:49 pm

  7. Terrifying. And believable, sadly. I did a consulting gig at a state-run mental hospital … and, oh, the stories! I’m sure you’ve got some more to share, as well. ;)

    30 Jan 2007 at 12:52 am

Trackback URI | Comments RSS

Leave a Reply