Comments on: Steps

By: Donal

Donal — Sat, 08 Jul 2006 14:16:04 +0000

I think its clear what you set out to achieve Is and you succeeded. More time is always a nice luxury but you wrote a lovely descriptive scene there.

By: Teaandcakes

Teaandcakes — Sat, 08 Jul 2006 14:12:01 +0000

Thanks. I wanted to use it as an exercise in description but my brain is filled with the flu and I had to get my exam/poster presentation finished so it’s not as detailed and descriptive as I originally planned.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Fri, 07 Jul 2006 21:36:17 +0000

I can almost guarantee you mine was shorter and more rushed!! Great job. Excellent images.

By: littlegoat

littlegoat — Fri, 07 Jul 2006 21:06:37 +0000

nice scene. taking that pic and describing all these little things that happen there and people who pass through. i dig.

By: Cope

Cope — Fri, 07 Jul 2006 20:46:47 +0000

Nice. I like that you’ve simply gone for description. So far with this things, I’ve tried to build some story, but you’ve painted a picture. I like it.

By: Elimare

Elimare — Fri, 07 Jul 2006 18:06:16 +0000

nice one Is. Same comment as me, wanted to spend more time on it.

By: Tales Of The Gurrier » Blog Archive » Vatican 2.0

Tales Of The Gurrier » Blog Archive » Vatican 2.0 — Fri, 07 Jul 2006 12:33:41 +0000

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