Comments on: Steps

By: Donal

Donal — Sat, 08 Jul 2006 14:16:04 +0000

I think its clear what you set out to achieve Is and you succeeded. More time is always a nice luxury but you wrote a lovely descriptive scene there.

By: Teaandcakes

Teaandcakes — Sat, 08 Jul 2006 14:12:01 +0000

Thanks. I wanted to use it as an exercise in description but my brain is filled with the flu and I had to get my exam/poster presentation finished so it’s not as detailed and descriptive as I originally planned.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Fri, 07 Jul 2006 21:36:17 +0000

I can almost guarantee you mine was shorter and more rushed!! Great job. Excellent images.

By: littlegoat

littlegoat — Fri, 07 Jul 2006 21:06:37 +0000

nice scene. taking that pic and describing all these little things that happen there and people who pass through. i dig.

By: Cope

Cope — Fri, 07 Jul 2006 20:46:47 +0000

Nice. I like that you’ve simply gone for description. So far with this things, I’ve tried to build some story, but you’ve painted a picture. I like it.