Comments on: Heat

By: Cheryl

Cheryl — Sun, 18 Jun 2006 16:39:15 +0000

Wow, I know some mothers-in-law who are like that. Thankfully, mine is not among them. She’d be leading the charge with the hose…

By: Cope

Cope — Fri, 16 Jun 2006 22:57:40 +0000

I like this piece because it seems genuine and believable. To my knowledge, you’re not a mom, but you wrote in a way that made me feel that you were.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Fri, 16 Jun 2006 22:56:49 +0000

Great details–I love the constantly changing neuroses. Fun ending, too.

By: elaine

elaine — Fri, 16 Jun 2006 16:31:56 +0000

but I do know who it is! Wonderfully accurate – and wouldn’t you so like to do that with a hose but alas, couldn’t if wanted to – hosepipe ban.

By: Sara

Sara — Fri, 16 Jun 2006 13:34:51 +0000

Oh its nice to sit down, put my aching feet underneath the PC desk for 5 minutes and have a read of your Friday writing.
Thoroughly enjoyable!

By: Teaandcakes

Teaandcakes — Fri, 16 Jun 2006 10:41:14 +0000

All characters and events are totally fictional… ok, so a couple of them might be based on real people, but not on real events. I’m wondering if we’re thinking of the same person though?

By: Elisa

Elisa — Fri, 16 Jun 2006 09:56:52 +0000

My mum has a thing about water. Once the sun comes out no one is safe from buckets being poured out the window on top of you or the hose being turned on you when she is ‘innocently’ watering the garden. Growing up our house was full of a range of water pistols. Everything from tiny little things with a range of about a foot to those mad yolks with ghostbuster backpacks to battery powered super soakers.

By: Donal

Donal — Fri, 16 Jun 2006 09:33:19 +0000

Hmm I think I might know who this is…

Nice piece Is.

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Severe Jam Damage :: Flickr Fiction :: June :: 2006 — Fri, 16 Jun 2006 09:32:46 +0000

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